A person that I admire is my dad.
He has one of the best personalities ever.He is kind and very understanding.He treats me like an adult.He is funny and has a lot of charisma.He has an inviting smile and a laugh to die for.His eyes are the most beautiful and when they light up it makes me really happy where I can’t help but smile.He can be defensive,but he is always protective.He is a risk-taker,and it makes him fun,even though some of the risks are not worth the possible consequences.His taste in music is very similar to mine.He is a good friend and is always there for any and everyone in times of need.
I love my dad so much and I constantly think of him and wish the best.He may not have the best job or the most money,but to me that doesn’t matter one bit.It is about who he is and how great his soul is.My dad is one of the greatest persons I know and that is why he is my hero.
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