this is a story【 [told ]】 by my father:when i was【 [a] 】boy ,the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the spring festival,my grandma was the best cooker in the world【 [and ] 】could make the most delicious dishes.one time i just couldn't wait for the spring festival dinner,【[so] 】i was about to take a piece from a cooked duck,i saw grangma in the kitchen looking at me.【[shaking]】 her head,she said,"it isnt a good time to do that ,dear."at once i 【[apologized] 】and controlled 【myself 】at my best till the dinner started,you know,that was a dinner we had 【been waiting】 for several 【[months]】
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