请问这句话,语法有错么As time went on,the dreams of the past have gone away _英语解答

请问这句话,语法有错么
As time went on,the dreams of the past have gone away from me.

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解答

As time went on,their hopes began to wane.
随着时间的消逝,他们的希望开始变得渺茫
建议用一般过去时态
As time went on,the dreams of the past went away from me.