when the men came to take his things to the new house for him这应该是一个时间状语从句,lz没有打上主句啊
当人们把他的东西给他拿到新房子的时候for him可以省略吗省略了，就不知道是给谁带去了除非说， to his new houseto the new house for him和to his new house都可以吗不是英语结构相似，是表达的意思差不多