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The pie chart demonstrates the percentage of different countries' consumer outlay on various items in 2002.
As can be found from the graph,the citizens from these five countries spent on the food,drinks and tobacco most,particularly Turkey and Ireland,which accounted for 32.14% and 28.91% respectively.By contrast,the spending on leisure or education took up the least percentage in general,for instance,the Spanish just cost 1.98% of their income on it,besides,the Ireland people spent 2.21% on average,to name but two.What is more,the expenditure of clothing and footwear is relatively more than the leisure and education,for example,it is extremely starling that the percentage of Italian spent in clothes and shoes ranked the first,which occupied some 9%,Turkey is the next,which took up 6.63%,while the consumers from Sweden just stood at 5.40%.
By and large ,the consumers from these five countries were willing to spend much more money on food,drinks and tobacco,which were considered as a vital part of their subsistence.