大家帮我看看啊,这段话有没有错误的时态、单词什么的?快点啊谢谢
< < Heidi > >is occurred in the the Alps story, here is the hometown of the author Spyri. Heidi is a cute girl, orphaned at an early age, she came to the Alps and stubborn but kind grandpa live together. Later, Heidi went to Frankfurt, and a girl named Clara'skeep company. Clara was sick and unable to walk, although Clara and Heidi became friends became more open and bright, but Heidi was very homesick.Ultimately ,Heidi returned to the Alps,back before the relatives and friends a happy life. After,Clara visiting Heidi, with the help of Heidi and grandpa, Clara finally lost the wheelchair to walk, this story has a happy ending.
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解答
楼上网友有地方修改错误哦,第一句应该把is去掉,中间部分keep company不是合开了一家公司,而是Clara陪在Heidi身边.那我在你们基础上再修改下咯,修改如下< < Heidi > >appeared in the the Alps story,and here is the hometown of the author Spyri.Heidi is a cute girl,orphaned at an early age.She came to the Alps and lived with her stubborn but kind grandpa together.Later,Heidi went to Frankfurt,and a girl named Clara was keeping company wtih her.But Clara was sick and unable to walk.Although Clara and Heidi became friends and more open to each other,Heidi was very homesick.Ultimately ,Heidi returned to the Alps,having a happy life with her relatives and friends.After that,Clara went to visit Heidi.With the help of Heidi and grandpa,Clara finally could walk by herself without weel chair.Obviously this story has a happy ending.
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