帮忙~英语作文挑错~或者是哪看着别扭
I met my wife totally by accident, but I fell in love with her at the first sight.
It was a delightful winter night, no cold wind and the bothersome noise, that I decided to hang out to relax my poor nerves tightened by those work affairs for a long time.
Staring on my shadow under street lamps which turned long and short, I could even hear the shadow’s cheers for such a cheerful break from the heavy work. “Oh, it must have shortened my lifetime.” Thinking of the work, I complained.
“Don’t worry, you will live long.” A woman’s voice came to me suddenly.
I turned around straightway, and there was a tall girl dressed in white standing right by me. Her hair waterfall against the light-coloured skin hangs down and her attractive eyes catched my attention.
“I’m Xie Bi-an and would you do me a favour?” she said.
“Of course. What is it?”
“I get lost with my brother, who is a little short with dark skin. Could you help me look for him? You know, I’m somewhat scared in these dark nights.
“Ok,” I smiled, “Is there any other feature about you brother?”
“Huh…he wears a top hat, like this.” She conjured a wired top hat at the same time. I looked at her surprisely, and she just smiled and stuck her tongue. “Such a funny girl.” I thought.
“I even don’t know your name.” She said.
“Oh, Xiao Ming… Wow, look there, is he your brother?” I pointed at a man with overhigh hat hitting toward us.
“Terrific. He’s my brother Fan Wu-jiu. I can’t finish my task without him tonight.” She breathed a sigh of relief.
“Your task?”
“Yeah, now I have to back to my work.” She shot a glance at her brother and continued, “It is really nice to meet you.”
“Could I see you again?” I liked this girl and blurted out.
“Of course, we must see each other someday. Bye, Xiao Ming.” She waved her hand as she was walking away.
Tomorrow, I still thought of the mystical girl while I was passing a neighbor whose family were preparing for a funeral.