I still remember how (nervously 改为 nervous) I was on my first day in the new school three (year 改为 years) (before 改为 ago).I found it (how去掉,或改成 very) difficult to follow my teacher in （加上the）first English class.She spoke (in 去掉) English throughout the class,(that改为 which) was totally different (as改为 from) the lessons I had taken before.In the morning class the next day,my English teacher came to me while (she改为 I) was reading the text aloud.After listening (加上 to) me for a while,she gave me a big smile and said she (likes 改为 liked) my voice very much.The smile shone (on 去掉) the whole day and for several （day 改为 days）.Thanks to the smile,I began to be confident.
我只能做到上面结果,不知道原文是不是分十行排列,且9个错误1个划勾.也不知道你的输入有没有造成新的错误.希望你能看得懂我的答案.