我写了我的第一篇英语日记,求谁帮我看看有什么错误,或者可以有更好的表达么
Wen.,May,4th Fine
I will keep a dairy from today on.I know there may be a difficulty to learn English well just as my Chinese,but I still want to have a try.Though there are many differences between English and Chinese,they are both languages,so these methods I study Chinese could be used in my English as well.And I blieve I'll do a good job.
I want to go to Peking University,and I know I'll manage to live my dream.
My first jounal is a little bit short,but it'll be more and more great,and so will my English.
我的英语作文是我最大的缺陷,所以我想写日记是最好的联系方法了吧,写的不太好,而且没什么内容,请帮忙看看,怎样表达更地道吧,
人气:332 ℃ 时间:2019-08-31 09:50:39
解答
Generally speaking,you have done a good job.整体而言,你写的不错.1.Wednesday,星期三的简写是 Wed,不是Wen;2.I will keep a dairy from today on;改成 I will keep writing dairy day by day ; 加上动词write,强...
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