求帮忙修改一篇高中英语自我介绍
请帮忙修改修改.有语法错误或者语病的帮我指出来.希望多帮我改用一些从句,写的差还请谅解,修改很到位的另外加分
Hello everyone.Happy Christmas Day.My name is xxx.I am sixteen years old.Igraduate from XXX Middle School.
In my spare time .I like to read some books.I think reading could enlarge my knowledge.I must study hard so that my ten-year hard work will pay off.I hope I can be admitted to the ideal university .I hope we can work together to progress together.We shouldn’t let down our parents.