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Dear Paula,
hi ,how about you Are you busy to be a horror story writer I have read your letter before and I am happy about you are asking me to help you describe your horror story setting .I think my school is a good place to be a horror story sence.
My school is suitable to be a horror story sence.It is because when my school is turn off all the light at night,it is very scare and gloomy.I have heard someone say that our school have many real horror story When I heard it ,I was very afraid.So my school would be a good setting for your horror story.
on one side,our school surrounding area have some tress.One of the tress has a rope that is hanging.It is said a girl had hanged in that tress,since she was crossed in love.Some children saw the girl let down with a rope at night and also usually hear the piercing sounds.
on the other side,our school has happened a homicide case about a teacher who was Mr.Hai had mental disord.He killed students after school.Then,he was suicide.
As we all know that ,this was posted in the major newspapers.The classroom was reject using.I think this classroom is absolutely gloomy,empty and dusty.Some gossip said the wall had been seepage red liquid.And nobody know that what is it!
My school toilet is very scare ,it is because the toilet is very wear and the light is very dim .I have
heard a terrible story from school toilet .It about a girl go to toilet during a lesson.During the girl
going toilet ,she heard a sound was singing ,but the toilet was no people.Then she screamed and ran away
Coclusion ,my school has a lots of scary places and story but I think these two is the most horrible.I hope you can use my school for your story because my school is very suitable .hope this suggestion can help you .
Love,
Chris