1.伴随着媒体关注的增加
With the increasing attention from media
2.人们的健康怎么
一般说people's physical health 或 people's health
3.男人们的薪水
men's salary -- 整体概念
4.它将对他们的家庭生活产生冲击
It would impact their home life 这样的说法较少见,更多的是
It would impose an impact on their home life
5.快节奏的生活方式将导致.
Fast-paced lifestyle will lead to ...
Sonic lifestyle will lead to ...
6.供养他的家庭 中 供养可以用raising么?
可以用raise的,不过我建议用support,raise 多指养孩子等,
It's difficult raising a family on a small income.
依靠微薄的收入是很难养家的
7.should need可以一起用么?
答：不需要,也不可以这样用!need 有情态动词功能
8.当社会发展的更好时,人们的生活水平也会提高
people's living standard will be bettered if the society develops more quickly