帮忙改一篇英语作文 我英语很烂,请大家帮忙指出语法错误、用词不当之处,最好能讲一讲怎么改比较好 It is very lucky for me to pass the test.But I am still happy that I passed it.Now I have more time doing something I love to do.I made a goal for myself.I hope I can achieve it before Septermber. Yesterday my teacher asked me to make a PPT to introduce why my grade improved so quickly.When I was talking,i was very nervous because I hardly ever talk to so many people.Suddenly,I saw Tina was staring at me with a encouraged smile.I had confidence to myself.I finished the introdution and won a burst of applause. After the talk,I thanked Tina and we became friends as well.
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.Now I have more time doing something I love to do.应改为.Now I have more time to do something I love .before Septermber应该为by Septermber 其实encouraged也可以 不过改成hortative更好I hardly ever talk...请问怎么用美句,如何收集美句呢》