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修改一下我的作文：My dream life
in the future ,i will be very beautiful .i will go to work by car so i will be very happen everyday .i will live in a big and elegant house with my parents ,in my home,has a robort,it will be do dull jobs everyday .On hoilday ,we'll go to Sydney Opera House.Go to there is my dream.What about you?