Few days ago, I saw my old class friend Li Yin. To my surprise, she had won a first class prize in the English competition. I can recall that she used to be a very shy girl when we were in school. She was so quiet and never said much in front of people. After parting for several years, she has really gone through a huge change. She is not afraid anymore. I should take pride in and be very happy for her. Maybe I should learn from her as well and be more condifent in myself, and try to transform myself into a braver person too.
这还可以吗? 已用了全部你提供的词,希望会满意.
很高兴能够帮到你,并望采纳,谢谢.