初三英语作文,求批改.批改的话最好能改成初中水平,不要改的太高深了,
As we know,studying is student's duty.If you want do your favorite work,First you have to work hard.And then you should get a good grade.Finally,your dream will come true while you growing up.Although some people think it's unfair to these poor students.But I think these poor students will get good-work's change in the future.