仅对楼上不对的地方更正：
1,第二位是对的
3：照顾自己,take care of ourselves,不是take care ourselves.也不是be care of...
4,put on 穿上
5,第一位是对的
6,He wanted to have his own room.或者He wanted to have a room of his own.
7,第一位是对的.