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题目大概是同不同意学校应该在体育设施和社会交往方面加大投入
Sports and social activities should definitely be regarded as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.So critical it is for a diverse and dynamic educational institute that we can hardly find reasons not to offer more support for spots and social activities.
As diversity is becoming a more indispensable component of universities and college,sports and social activities are more crucial parts of the high-quality education.It’s hard to judge a person according to whose academic achievement.Nowadays,a high standard educational institute is paying more attention to bring up students with personalities,hobbies,and other important characters and abilities.If they didn’t see sports and social activities as indispensable components,they would be less attractive to excellent students.
Without sports and social activities,students only can devote themselves in the monotonous all-day study and will be lack of the ability to keep balance of entertainment,study,and social communication.This will obviously leads to a consequence that students have difficulties taking care of themselves and managing time and daily activities.It will also do harm to students’ health,passion,and curiosity.
Universities and colleges should provide more financial support to sports and social activities due to many students are short of the awareness of the significance of the extra activities.Admittedly the expense for classes and libraries are crucial,but more financial support for sports and social activities is also necessary for the reason that it will enhance the awareness of students to take part in more activities besides to study.Hardly can a person achieve a lot without a good health and social communication.It seems critical for universities and colleges to publicize the point of view to students.
I believe the situation that lacking of awareness of sports and social activities will be improved as the universities and the colleges give more financial aid.Only in this way,can students experience the diverse campus culture and activities.