没分啊- -
书写不规范啊
抄的时候自己改下- -
大小写什么的 可能有拼法错误 自己检查
字数多了的话 自己取舍
Dear Mike,
i am Lihua.let me introduce some extracurricular activities in my school to you.
my campus life is colourful.school provide us a hour to enjoy extracurricular activities everyday.in addintion there are many available hobby clubs that we can participate in such as Math group computer group choirs sports teams and so on.(这句随你写不写 in my opinion the most interesting activity is band and it is also fashion in my school.although i just konw a little about guitar and drum ,i still can become a great vocal in my band because my sweet voice.) another popular activiey besides band is english corner. the number of students who join in it is increasing rapidly because it not only give us the chances to practice english spoken by communicating in english but also make us become more brave.in short it prove our english study.
what about you? write soon.
Lihua
楼主给点追分啊
打的好累的