大概改了一下,原文写的不错,意思很到位,分数不会低.

What Electives to Choose
Nowadays, there are various electives in
colleagues and universities that students could choose not only associate whit
their professional but also their interest in.

这里修改professions和interests

Reasons for different options, of course,
are in abundance. Some students tend to choose the courses for professional

for professional 改成 for job

requirement, they support professional knowledge enhance. Others pay attention

they support改成These courses would enhance their knowledge.

to individual interest, they harbor the idea learning is in order to expanding horizons.

they harbor改成the idea is to expand their visions in particular fields.

From my own perspective, the ideal is the
two elements combined together. But when I have to make a decision, I would
pick up the best choose to my interest and professional requirement. Only inthis way can we

I would 改成 I would pick the most suitable courses to fit into my interest and job requirement.


enjoy a enrich campus life.