death,必须是名词
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habbits 必须是复数,因为口语都是这么说的
作文就自己写了作文就帮帮我吧Fruit and vegetables are good for our health and we should eat fruit and vegetables four or five times a week. Firstly, Tofu products are extremely healthy food and we should eat them every day. In addition to eating Tofu, we can also drink milk and yogurttwice a day . Lastly, It's also necessary to do some sports. We should do more exercise in every morning or evening.我觉得他做得不错，加点顺序词就更好了，还有他最后一句有一个语法错误，我也改了那还有一篇呢哎，我一般都不答很多字的题目，这次就破例了，你的老师肯定赞你There are various ways to keep healthy. First of all, we should have a healthy eating habbits, which means eating more vegetables and fruits. Secondly, doing exerise helps as well, and we should do it at a daily base. What's more, we can never ignore our sleeping quality because bad sleeping habbites make us die earlier. Lastly, making more friends never hurts. Socializing with people makes us happy and confident. To conclude, it's very important to take good care of our body.