检查这篇英语作文有何语法拼写错误 急
Yuan long ping is a great scientist.He was born in September 7th 1930 in Beijing .he studied in Southwest Agricultural College when he was young.He worked very hard.When he was at school.In 1973,He has developed a new kind of rice.Then he becomes a famous scientist.Because of the new kind of rice,many countries grow more rice than before.In my opinion He is a hero of china!
人气:371 ℃ 时间:2019-10-11 06:36:23
解答
He was born in September 7th 1930
具体到某天用 on
When he was at school 还是去掉 was
In 1973,He has developed a new kind of rice.
这句话改成有问题
应该有一般过去式 改为 In 1973 He produced
a new kind of rice develop是改进的意思
改进了一种新种米 既然是新的怎么改进呢?
所以改成生产 Then he becomes a famous scientist
应用过去式 且去掉scientist 比较好
Then he became famous
many countries grow more rice than before
这句话 用grow 似乎不妥 改为produce更好
than before 可以省略
其他都可以了
推荐
猜你喜欢
- 代数式是用____把数字和字母连接起来的式子
- 太阳系行星中在地球上看起来最明亮的是
- matlab中,a是复数,a=1+2*i,abs(a)是求a的模值,那a的相位用什么命令求呢
- 一项工程,单独做,甲队要12天,乙队要10天,如果两队合做3天,可以完成这项工程的几分之几?如果剩下的由
- 1、找出表示蚂蚁团结的句子.2、短文通过描写蚂蚁( )的事情,赞颂了().
- 方程.五分钟内要阿阿阿.
- 小红看一本故事书,第一天看的页数与这本书总页数的比是7:3,如果再看20页,正好看完这本书的一半,这本书
- 把长12厘米,宽10厘米,高6厘米的长方体切成两个长方体,表面积最大可以增加_平方厘米,最少可以增加_平方厘米.