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大概就是说富国该不该帮助穷国发展?
There is an argument that whether developed countries should offer help to poorer countries if they can not afford the enough cost on domestic education,on hospitals and on the business with foreign countries.Personally,I suppose richer countries need to finance the countries involved with poverty.It is well-known that western countries had made great changes after the Industrial Revolution,from then on,a variety of capitalized countries went on to a road to fortune without any stagger.Many raw-materials,labors and money flew into these quick developing countries from their colony which mostly are recognized as poorer countries today where almost located in Africa and some parts of Asia.
Leaving aside these historic reasons,modern technology has brought the Earth into a village,that is to say,every country is much more easily influenced by others than ever before.Rich countries cannot highly develop by themselves without support from developing countries.So that,we can put responsibility of rich countries into account when we are discussing the problem of poverty.In contrary,some people,but not most,thought the poorer countries should not be financialized by rich countries.Actually,contribute to this kind of view,we are now facing the problem of terrorism all over the world.The great difference between the rich and the pauper create the uncertainty and instability of human's future.
All in all,I deeply agree with the idea about rich countries taking more responsibility on helping the poorer counterparts.That is essential to the final concord of all the human beings.