当我写这个作文时,她还十分悲伤地认为我不会写她.
When i wrote the composition,she was sad,thinking that she wouldn't be the leading role in it.开头when后面为什么i不用现在时呢?你没有注明时态呀。。。可以用现在时When i write the composition, she is sad, thinking that she won't be the leading role in it.祝你开心~