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Last month,i travelled to QingYuan province,this city is very beautiful.it is famous for hotspring and rafting and have a various of delicious food.
we want to take a risk firstly. so we decided to go water rafting.when we arrived to the most famous rafting place called XuanZhen, it had had a lot of people waited in line. After ten minutes,a bus took us to the tip mountain,it is the rafting source.we put on the air jacket and other safety.with excited mood we were set out.OH,it was so irritative.our raft run very fast and hit the rock ceaseless.the river has a lot of fall and when the raft rushed down the fall, we were almost got into the underwater.our clothes were wet completely.but we were so happy,cheered loudly.in the middle of the river,there was a flat water area.our raft got together.itwas so funny,some people used their helmet to fill with water and fighted the other people.what a exciting it was.we all enjoy this fight.
after one hour ,we finished the imposing trip.
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