帮我看一下这篇文章有没有错误
Hello Kitty is a very cute cat.Her birthday is November 1st.She is open and clear.She always wears a smile on her face and looks happy.She always wears a pretty small butterfly bow.he can play tennis and the piano very well.Her favorite subjects are English and music.She wants to be a poet or a musician.There are six people in Kitty’s family:her parents,her grandparents and her sister Mimmy.Mimmy is Kitty’s twin sister.Mimmy is a quiet girl.
I think Kitty is a very cute cat.I’m very like Hello Kitty.
这是我英语课前演讲要用的,自己写的,看看有没有错误.