In June 1st I went to the zoo with my parents.I saw a fat panda.It is black and white.I thought it was cute.I like it very much.I wanted to make friends with it.My parents saw I like pandas very much,...写得非常不错，问你最后两个小问题就行了。1 panda doll能不能改成a toy panda？2 你的文章字数满60了吗1.可以的，语法对就可以了2.满了，正好3.另一个的回答他的语法错了，第一句就错了