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Andy,a banker,was convicted of murder.He was innocent,but nobody trusted him.Hopelessly,he had to go to the prison.However,he never gave up himself.Even if he was in the prison,he could be as excellent as he ever be .The prisoners were pretty passive.They even didn't know what free was.Andy wasn't moved by them.Wiping all the difficulties out,he crawled 500 yards through raw sewage to a nearby river .He crawled to freedom in this way.
This is a story of hope on book The Shawshank Redemption .I admire Andy after i read this novel.The sentence "Hope is a good thing,maybe the best of things ,and no good thing ever dies."represents the spirit of Andy very well.Yes,never lose your hope however difficult the situation is.The result you get will show you the power of hope is really strong .
In this year's Olympic Games,Chinese men's gymnastics team also showed us the power of hope.With hope,they achieved an unimaginable success.
The hope has made Andy,Chinese men's gymnastics team successful.Have a try.With hope,miracles can happen on everyone!