In the eyes of the majority of Chinese people, ice cream eating children and women, a large man holding an ice cream is very inappropriate.
从语法上看,存在明显问题chinglish(中式英语)
For most of Chinese, icecream is for femals and kids, a man with a icecream in hand is not in good taste. 后面两个短句中间没有连接词,不符合.
如果想要句子显得更有水平一些,应该这样翻译.
In the eyes of the overwhelming majority of Chinese people,icecream is suitable for children and females,then/but a man with a icecream is inappropriate.