初三英语作文,帮忙修改一下
关于节约用水的,帮我看看哪里有错误哪里不通顺,提提意见
Can you imagine life without water? Can you imagine that you can't wash clothes,clean the floor,cook and even drink one day? If you think the water on the earth won't be used up? Maybe you never noticed that the water on the earth is less than before.And the water in the many places hasn't been drink because it wasn't safe for us. So,we must save the water every minute.
But how can we save the water in in life? I think we can use the water has been wash rice to wash vegetables rice. We can use the clean water to wash clothes, and use the dirty water to rush to toilet.It can save much water if everyone does that.And have you have any advece about saving water?
I believe that our lifes won't be without water if everyone saves water!
人气:380 ℃ 时间:2020-01-27 20:02:32
解答
第二行后一句话有问题,if应改成do.第三行最后一个the去掉第四行根据意思我认为应把hasn't been drink改为can't be drunk.第二段第一句话多了一个in.第二句话语法有问题.改为I think we can use the water having was...
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