求修改英语作文With the development of Chinese economy ,we are becoming r_英语解答

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With the development of Chinese economy, we are becoming richer than
past. Thus students can getmuch more money from their parents. However, it may not be good for students to have so much money because it can result in
their bad habit of wasting money. In my opinion, it’s great to form the
habit of saving money.
On one hand, saving money is a tradition that our ancient left to us. It
has great significance for us because poor families still exist and they need monetary supports.In addition, saving money helps us to feel secure since nobody knows what will happen in the
future. Saving can be regarded as a kind of investment as well.
On the other
hand, if students believe that using tomorrow’s money is good, they might use
money recklessly which will lead to great waste. And even worse, if they cannot
earn enough money to pay off their bills, there will be a bubble economy.
In conlusion, saving money does have lots of advantages, So it’s better to do rather than talk and start saving money.