1.Little Diana was standing in front of her mirror with her eyes closed.
in front of her mirror我认为in front of the mirror更好
2."Why are you standing there with your eyes closed?" asked the mother.
最后应该为 the mother asked.
3."So I can see what I look like when I'm asleep." she replied.
so应该为because
英语学得很好嘛
继续努力 下次不要犯同样的错误