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My Ideal Job
My name is Zhou Wei.I'm a girl.I'm studing at a middle school.My favoritee subject is hostess.I would like to be a hostess when Ieavethe primary school.
If I a hostess,I can take happe to spectator.And I can sing or dance.I can were a beautiful chothes……
But I know a good hostess,must have a smart head,must hard work,must 有学问.And lots of things.But now I must hard studing。Ibelieve I will be an good hostess
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My favoritee subject is hostess.(favourite/favorite你写错了,还有如果你是说你喜欢的职业是女主持人的话最好写Show hostess)If I a hostess,I can take happe to spectator(这句的小问题是happe是happy吧,大问题...
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