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2010 6 01
Today is children's day ,there are so many friends Sigh their childhood in internet.Happy children's day!ted said we Attach importance to 61 suddenly ,it marks us grow old .People always treasure after something lost .so many people change their user picture in the micro-blog,me too.I used a kindergarten's picture as my new user picture.It is funny .The picture bring me back to long long ago.I have to sigh time runs faster.This afternoon ,I surfing the net ,I login my douban .The group I love Psychology has a old topic,ask the follower question .I ask what is the different between need and desire This Decade ,too much desire make people become Irrational.recently I know much problem about china from the net,for example:commit Suicide .I feel dark but I always believe china will be better in tomorrow.Due to the weather ,I din't jogging.What a pity .In general,I am lazy today.see you My grammar may exist a lot of mistakes,I hope you correct me
2010 5 31
For a long time ,my English stay a poor status.I hope my English can improve,not just for exam,in order to know the world better.Today,I spent most time to the accounting ,to read the Chapter of accounting supervise.The Knowledge point is so boring ,made me mad.but I should carry on .After class,I go to Library to read newspaper which called Southern Weekend.In the Internet,much people feel dissapoint to it ,but I don't think so.In my eyes ,Southern Weekend still a good newspaper.In here ,you can know china better.The net will cut soon,I must stop to write ,see you .
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解答
第二行"ted said "用大写,句子开头,Attach importance to 61 suddenly ,Attach小写,61没这么表达
“it marks us grow old ”是make
me too太口语化了!改为I am also do that
much people feel dissapoint to it 是dissapointed
中国是China,要大写.还有错误.你最好再认真看看!
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