六级作文批改
请大家帮我修改下这篇六级作文,我词汇感觉不怎么丰富,所以表达的可能比较那什么,希望大家多提意见.该怎么改进我今后的作文?如果总分15分,可以得多少分呢?
The damage of public facilities
There has been a discussion about the damage of public facilities.It is obvious that it will affect people’s formal life.Additionally,precious resources of society will be wasted.It is crucial that effective actions should be taken to prevent the damage of public facilities.
To begin with,we should improve citizens’ sense of responsibility.That is because people are not aware of their actions will how harmful to other people.When public facilities are damaged,other people can hardly use them.That virtually brings about poor influences to people’s formal life.In addition,some rules can be put into practice.For instance,if someone damage public facility,he must pay for his action.Last but not least,we can reward the action which protect public facilities from being damaged,moreover make it known by people.Only by these measures can we prevent the damage of public facilities.
In fact,more than three ways can be adopted.The solutions vary according to different situations.As for me,not only efforts of citizens,but also government’s should be taken to solve the problem.All in all,in order to make our country a better place in which we live,we should exert ourselves in struggle for the combat the damage of public facilities.