帮我修改一下英语作文,改成过去式
Yesterday,we visited the island of Bali silver and gold,we play on the beach,also side combing,came to the small island canoeing,playing shoot the ball,eat seafood,afternoon,i also visited the fascinating underwater world,was lovely clown fish.We sat in the boat to see the sunset,was really pretty terrific
这里有些过去式还没该过来,帮我改一下,
还有什么意见写一写,可能有些语句不通顺!
请写明你的学历，