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这句话语法对吗?It's a common social phenomenon that
It's a common social phenomenon that Internet using is particularly prevalent among the public,especially the young generation.

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语法没错,但是极为拗口.尤其是前面的“common social phenomenon”和“prevalent”意思重复了.
建议改动：
1.删掉前半部分：
【Public internet usage is particularly prevalent,especially among the younger generation.】
2.删掉prevalent:
【Public Internet usage,especially among the younger generation is becoming a common social phenomenon.】