关于互联网影响人的社交：第一段：As the technologies advanced, more and more peoplebecome more socialize online but communicate less with the actual people aroundthem. Back in time, we chat with our fa...很感谢您！
但是好像有点不符合要求。。
比如说第二篇，能否把在互联网普及之前人与人之间的交流方式等写出来，然后再写互联网普及之后人与人之间的交流方式等。不要一上来就是however，这样子我没有办法按照老师的要求出阅读题的呀。
您受累，成的话我再加悬赏！
还有什么不明确的可以现在问，我白天没有时间，明天晚上来收~！再感谢！这样子对不？
People in the past enjoy outhood activities and social hours within the real world, while the people living in modern period begin to change negaitively.Peoplespend more and more time on internet and social Medias. Once we’re online, we’remostly killing time. Every day after school we rush through all activities and immediatelygo online to chat with those who we might not even know much of. We know nolonger spend our time dealing with the live people, but rather with those whohide their faces behind screens and pretend to be friendly. Our lives are beingstained by the internet as we communicate less and less with real people inreal world.