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剑6 test3
Some People Believe That Visitor To Other Countries Should Follow Local Customs And Behaviour.Others Disagree And Think That The Host Country Should Welcome Cultural Differences.Discuss Both These Views And Give Your Own Opinion.
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The tourist industry and migration has played a positive role in the communication between countries,meeting the culture needs of the public and carrying forward national culture.Some individuals hold the views that visitors to other countries should study local culture,others argue that the host country should contain different cultures.
It is obviously that following the local customs and behavior makes the tourists and immigration communicate with local people easier and they can living in other countries more convenient.Furthermore,visitors can enrich their experiences and broad their horizons through learning other countries’ cultures.Thirdly,it is benefit local countries since they can showcase the brilliant histories and the ethnic cultures to foreign visitors.However,contact with and assimilation of local cultures will reduce the uniqueness of visitors’ own cultures and make the world less colorful then before.
I agree with the other side of the debate that keeping the diversity of cultures would probably offer more advantages.Specifically,immigration or tourists who keep their own customs and behavior in other countries help to better introduce their national cultures to host countries,and the local residences can experience the different customs that they do not know.For instance,a lot of Chinese migrated to the North American and Europe in 20th centuries,and they have kept their own cultures and lifestyles,as we know,they still celebrate the Spring Festival on every first day of Chinese luna year in other countries,and the local people also showed their interesting on this Chinese traditional event.
In conclusion,as the culture globalization making the world in one homogenous global culture,the host countries should welcome the culture difference to prevent the reduction of cultural uniqueness.
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解答
1,第二段It is obvious that following .因为be动词后接形容词,不能接副词.
2,第二段第二行they can live in other countries .因为情态动词(can,should等)都接动词原形.
3,第二段第四行,thirdly不合适,它常和firstly,secondly一起,这里最好用what‘s more 或者直接去掉.同一行:benefit不能放在is后,is接形容词,用benefitial,意思是 有益的,有利的.
同一行:contact with and assimilation 中with去掉.
第三段:immigration or tourists 中immigration改immigrants,因为后面引导词是who而且or连接并列的成分.同段最后,interesting on改为interests in.
以上为个人意见,仅供参考,
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