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This is my friend.Her name is Emily.She is 14 years old.She is an English and she is from London.She is a student.She is in Class 6,Grade 7.We are in same school but we aren't in the same class.She has hamburgers and chicken for lunch.She likes playing tennis and playing volleyball.Emily and I are good friends.
作文要求:根据下列信息,写一段话,不少于10个句子。
姓名:Emily
年龄:14
出生地:伦敦
职业:学生
班级:
午餐食物:汉堡包、鸡肉
爱好:网球、排球
人气:364 ℃ 时间:2020-04-05 14:39:20
解答
She is an English 去掉an
We are in same school 其中in same改成in the same
其他地方都对 只是你的简单句用的太多了 如果你是刚开始学习的话 那就没什么问题了 如果你已经学了一些时候了 这个就太简单了 可以开始尝试用复杂句了
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