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My name is Song hongwei,who is a 13-year-old boy,I am study at jiaoda middle school.I am good at my classmate.I can play not only basketball,but also football.Ithink they’re exciting.I want to join the your club.I like English very much,I think it’s interesting,I can learn about English history.
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最好将第一句改成:I am a 13 -year -old boy named Song hongwei.这样短的句子没必要用定语从句.第二句是现在进行时,将study改成studying; jiaoda 中的j大写.第三句你是说‘我能与同学相处的好’吗?I can get alon...
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