The hand-shaking of the western countries could be accepted in China.But Chinese people prefer a more gentle handshaking and also with their eyes downcast to show respect to people.It would be regard as disrespect if you look directly into other's eyes.
His prototype was a cute green apple.He was born with golden spoons in his mouth and his pocket mony was as much as one million yuan(美元的话就是dollar,你根据情况选用) every month.He was not very clever and not so good at counting.He often got lost but he bear a charmed life.He liked humming verses.
你的翻译大意出来了,但是有点逐字对译,中式英语的痕迹太重,我尽力帮你修改了一下,有问题的话追问哈,大家共同学习.