请问这句英语有没有语病?The sunflowers surged as the golden sea.They just lik_英语解答

请问这句英语有没有语病?
The sunflowers surged as the golden sea.They just like the sun shined my dark heart.
大意应该是
向日葵像金色的海洋一样起伏翻涌,它们就像太阳照耀着我阴暗的心.
这句英语有没有语病?这里的“起伏翻涌”可以用surge吗?

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解答

The sunflowers waved in the wind like the golden sea.They are just like the sun shining at my dark heart.
不能用surge.这里是形容花群像海洋.