这篇雅思作文大概多少分?
I think museums refer to the place where we
can study and learn local culture and history.Today our cultural identify is
heavily influenced by globalization.As far as I concerned,the most important
target of museums is attracting more local inhabitants.Free tickets’
advantages outweigh disadvantages.
Personally,I think that cultural identify
should be preserved to some extent.Free admission for local history or art
museums is a necessary method to attract more people.For instance,western
cultures are popular in China,especially in students.However,few of them
interest in traditional culture such as calligraphy which represents our
particular art.Consequently,they are more likely to participate in a western
singer’s performance rather than visit a local museum.
Furthermore,the museums are freely opened
to local individuals since individual pays tax.It is general believe that the
original function of museums is to serve the public and provide places for
people to relax and learn.Charging is opposite the authorities’ function of
public service and disturbs our wellbeing society.
In spite of that,free admission of all museums
costs a great deal of money to the government,since there are a lot of demands
on tax revenue.By that I mean the government prefers to fund researches rather
than give free tickets for the sake of social development.
In my opinion,culture possesses similar
importance as modern technology in terms of society developing.Those people who
are against this opinion fail to realize the significance of cultural value.As
a result,free admission of museums dramatically benefits local residents and
society alike and must be made available.
人气:366 ℃ 时间:2020-07-07 09:01:58
解答
应该多用高级词汇像I think,In my opinion都太简单了,6分左右希望是6,已经两次5.5了。。祝你好运
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