短文改错:Now I'd like to tell you something took place in my school yesterday .
短文改错:NowI'dlike totellyousomethingtookplaceinmyschool yesterday.In theafernoon weareall heldtogether forour18-years-old birthday .Atthefirstwepromisedthatlikegrown-upswe should be responsibleforoursociety.Thenweexpressedthank toourparents whoexperiencedhardshipstobring usupand ourteacherswhoeducatedus heart or soul. Andourteachersalsogavetous cards expressingourgoodcongratulatinsandwishesto us .Firnally,we putonwonderfully performances.
共有10处错误,有漏词,有多余,有修改,每处错误及修改均仅限一词.
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解答
更正一楼一些错误,总共十处错误!具体情况如下：Now I'd like to tell you (改成something that took 或 something taking) place in my school yesterday. In theafernoon we (去掉 are)all heldtogether ...
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