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I want to talk something about the Italian's favorite food— macaroni.(句型错误,还有语法错误)Macaroni is a local food in italian and also very popular all around the world.(我感觉这句很繁琐,凸显你的水平小改了) In Italy,one single Italian eats about 28 kilogram macaroni each year.
Now experts have different ideas about the history of the macaroni.Some believe that the Marco polo had taken it from China .However,more experts think that Etruscans,who was the residents of Northern Italy in the 7th century,had begun to make macaroni early at that time.
- -,你的文章 感觉就像拿汉语拼凑出来的.有语法.但句子结构似乎没有诶.后面我都有点不知道你想表达什么.你是不是拿在线翻译写的作文?能把你的意思大概给我说哈么